Week 5, SAC Challenge 2014
(Compose 6 songs in 6 weeks)
Overview of this week's blog:
3. Reflections/Epiphanies on the songwriting process
4. The assignment for week 5
4. The assignment for week 5
LISTEN to my song:
"Knock Your Brains Out"
on Soundcloud
(Click on the song title, above)
Lyrics:
Knock Your Brains Out
© Copyright
music and lyrics by S. Katz, March 20, 2014
Artist/singer:
Shera Shakera
Verse
Are you
really fishing for me to say,
I’m hooked
on you, earthworm,
You’re
really okay!
Can you say
something confident,
Give your
soil a chance to regenerate,
Or else
just say/don’t say
Silence
(music stops),
Don’t even
whisper
Silence
(music stops),
Bury
self-doubt beneath the earth
Chorus
Your idea
was born,
Digested,
then by you, torn,
Let
opinions form,
You knocked
your brains out!
You knocked
your brains out,
Then kicked
them, self-doubt
Right into
the ground
Can I dig
them out,
Can I dig
them out?
Verse
You threw
an avalanche in my face
Not letting
me see,
That you’re
really okay!
But beneath
that white blanket,
Will you give
yourself a chance,
Melt the
snow
Let me see
your green grasses show
Or else
just say/don’t say
Silence
(music stops),
Don’t even
whisper
Be quieter
than an earthworm
Chorus
Your idea
was born,
Digested,
then by you, torn,
Let
opinions form,
You knocked
your brains out!
Bridge
If I may
dig holes into your work
At least
you made an effort
Let your
ideas circulate the earth…
Allow,
allow, allow (2 x)
Give me
your brain!
Allow,
allow, allow (2 x)
Give me
your brain
You’re
smarter than a worm,
You’re really
okay!
Chorus
Your idea
was born, oh yeah,
Your idea
was born, oh yeah, how nice
Your idea
was born
But, but
Your idea
was born
Digested,
then by you, torn,
Let
opinions form,
You knocked
your brains out!
(repeat last 4 lines, above)
You knocked
your brains out
Then kicked
them, self-doubt
Right into
the ground
Can I dig
them out,
Can I dig
them out?
Reflections/Epiphanies on the songwriting process
For this
week’s challenge, the exercise was to write in a stream-of-consciousness
fashion, for ten minutes a day, for five days.
Day 1
(Tues. March 18, 2014):
I allowed
ideas to come to my head, and wrote them down in note form. I ended up taking
notes on five different topics, and organized the ideas as I was thinking them,
into those topics.
The five
topics were:
1.A news
story (the plane that disappeared),
2.A recent
film,
3.Artists’
discussions on lack of confidence in their work (self-doubt),
4. Thoughts
about songs in my head,
5. Being so
busy all the time
I liked the topic
about artists’ discussions on lack of confidence in their work, and started to
write a song on the theme of self-doubt.
Day 2
(Wed. March 19, 2014):
I found the
exercise was similar to the exercise on writing 10 minutes a day, but this
time, instead of being very observant of everything around me, I noticed that
my writing was focused on my to-do list. In this case, I spent less time
observing everything around me, and more time allowing thoughts about the past
and future to permeate my writing, hence I allowed the pen to travel in time
with ideas about the past, present and future. I did not come up with any
brilliant song lines, but the ideas could be turned into a theme for a song,
such as the idea of being so busy all the time, as in theme #5 from my
yesterday’s writing.
Day 3
(Thurs. March 20, 2014):
I continued
with this flow of writing, not censoring any thoughts, and wrote in sentences,
but the exercise seemed to be getting easier. It takes practice, and a
discipline, but it’s really fun! By not censoring any thoughts and without
making judgments, I was unintentionally coming up with ideas that could be
turned into song lines that could possibly sound awesome in a song! When I
finished the exercise, I reread all the sentences that I liked, and underlined
them as potential ideas for a future song. I noticed I had written more ideas
about artists’ lack of confidence, and finished my song about it and recorded a
draft on it. Here was the line that inspired my song:
“Never put
yourself down as an artist.”
I continued
to work on my song, using the line above as the theme.
Day 4
(Fri. March 21, 2014):
The
exercise got even easier. I continued with the uninterrupted flow of writing,
allowed it to go anywhere it needed to, and then reread it, underlining all the
lines that are good ideas for songs. I noticed a lot of details came out in the
writing, making it easier to write a future song.
Here are
some great lines that came out of it:
“Should I
try to focus on my day or else allow my mind to concentrate on yesterday”
“Hey, I
looked at the clock, that was fast, 10 minutes is up!”
I will keep
these ideas as song lines for a future song!
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Day 5
(Sat. March 22, 2014):
It is just
becoming so much easier to do this, the more I do it, the easier it gets! A
recent acquaintance shared some personal news and in my stream of consciousness
writing, I came up with a line that I like, and will keep as an idea for a song
line in a future song:
“You have a
sunny disposition that drew me to you, and though the blinds are going down,
I’ll help you pull through.”
After the
five days, I revisited all the lines that I underlined, and was thinking about
either writing a new song, or reworking the song I already was working on
during the week.
I finished
the song, and after reading some discussion forums in SAC about songwriting,
while being inspired by a week’s worth of stream-of-consciousness writing, I
decided to get more creative by going with an earth worm analogy in my song.
I
researched the life of an earth worm, and it gave me ideas about using
analogies such as comparing a human brain with an earth worm’s brain, fishing
for a compliment (reworking that cliché as per week #4’s exercise), which I
changed to: “fishing for me to say, I’m hooked on you, worm”. I initially had
the title of “Don’t Knock Yourself Down” but it’s in the negative and not
original, so I changed it to: “Knock your brains out” which sounds more
interesting. I also threw in the avalanche analogy, which goes with nature and
the Canadian idea of snow.
Last week,
I deviated extremely from my usual patterns in songwriting, but this week I
decided to bring back some typical, maybe even cliché song structures back into
my work, because they make the songs sound good (eg. having a repetitive
chorus). However, I incorporated what I learned in weeks 1 through 5 of this
songwriting challenge. I thought about the theme (an artist’s self-doubt),
original opening line and title for the song (week 1), I tried to incorporate
some observations (week 2) (this time deemed from online discussions), tried to
deviate from typical song structures (week 3) (by lengthening the chorus, and
mixing minor and major keys (B minor and D major), threw in the unpredictable
idea of silences), and reworked a cliché (eg, instead of knock yourself down, I
used “knock your brains out,” and instead of “fishing for a compliment” I opened
with “are you really fishing for me to say”).
Enjoy the
song & feedback is always appreciated!
Peace/luv
from: Shera Shakera
The Challenge – Week 5 – Trusting the subconscious
March 18, 2014
by
“Are you ready for Week 5? Only 2 more challenges to go. This
week we will explore trusting the subconscious.Every writer has had the experience of coming up with a good idea and having no idea where it came from. We might try to recapture the magic by wearing the lucky t-shirt or using the magic pen, but is there a way to tap into that vast reservoir of ideas that live below the surface of the conscious? You can try stream-of-consciousness writing where you write, without stopping, judging or editing until you run out of ideas or your hand gets tired.
This week’s challenge:
Watch the video below. Then, for the next five days, spend at least 10 minutes (or until your hands get tired) writing from your stream of consciousness. At the end of the week, review what you have written and look for at least 5 ideas that could become songs. Choose one to bring to fruition.
Deadline: Tuesday, March 25, 2014
Please post the following:
1. The theme you chose to write about.
2. Your blog link.
3. Your SoundCloud Link.”
Please post the following:
1. The theme you chose to write about.
2. Your blog link.
3. Your SoundCloud Link.”
-Christopher Ward